AnimatedComedy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DEEP SPACE MUSK]

This deserves to win, that was FUCKING awesome... also, I’m getting some major Hilda vibes

Stradomyre responds:

Huge compliment :D Thank you!

[Fat and Musky]

That Elon Musk impression sound more like Johnny Depp (it would actually be an amazing Johnny Depp Impression)

[Elon Musk present for you a SUPA CYBER Truck]

There's potential in anyone who tries to get into animation

but

You’re too hectic in your voice acting, you’ve got to be more calm, and not shout into the mic all the time.

Also you’re outtro song thingy is WAY too inspired by Robot Chicken, they can do it, because they have all that chicken theme, but for you it just seems weird.

The main thing you have to remember is that Animation takes a LONG time and effort to make, you can’t make anything good in a short amount of time and you still have 4 days to make an animation which can actually be OK, if you put all your time into it.

Oh and try practice speaking English a little more, your accent makes it kind of difficult to hear what you are actually saying

[Elon musk takes on the moon]

Dude, your animation I super cool, but there’s too much shouting, it makes it a bit difficult to hear the actual jokes, so you don’t really notice the funny part.
Also the sentences are too long, your audience is guessing the punchline before it’s told.

In conclusion, you gotta work on your delivery and joke writing.

Try mimicking some comedians you like and see what works.

I also heard about a rule in Stand-Up comedy which says, that swearing shouldn’t make it funny, the joke should be able to not have any curse words and still be funny, that said, some jokes improves by adding curse words

Again, love your animations style

[Studio World]

I FUCKING LOVE THIS IDEA!!!